St Pius X feast day

Learning Goal 1:

We are learning TO USE OUR SENSES to describe what happened from our point of view.

We are learning t use WOW! words like adjectives and verbs to add impact for our audience (people who read our writing).

Today my class and I have been doing a moment in time writing about St Pius X feast day.

We had to describe what we heard,saw,felt and wondered. 

I did two drafts and the third one was the best so I decided to put the top which is draft three as my good piece of writing.

My work was checked by my teacher.